Once again, I need to thank *BlackGryph0n for the cutie mark vector. I would have tried it myself, if I hadn't finished the rest of Rarity at Midnight, after a long day. I must say, I love the look on her face. (This pose is from S1E14: Suited For Success)
Everything else is entirely done by me. Feel free to use this vector for non-commercial purposes, but if you upload the work, please link me! C:
NITPICK TIME! The cutie mark is a tad small and non-warped. It should be bigger, and slightly warped, as it is on a round surface - references help in this regard. Second thing is about the colours: her glasses seem to have no lens. Iirc they should have a blue lens. Either you forgot about it or left it at 0% opacity by accident(since I can see the lens shine, but not the lens colour itself). This is probably an issue with my monitor most likely but I can't tell the difference between her eye white and coat colour. Rarity isn't a white pony! She's a very light gray. Again, that might be an issue on my side. Her eyes have no gradient and no iris accents. On her far eye, just above the eyelashes (on the forehead line) there's a bit of the head fill poking outside the lines. There are quite a few areas in her hair where the fill has gaps: In the forelock, to the left of the second line of her horn, where the two thick lines meet. Two in the blueish part of the crest(about on the right of her mouth) Where the tail starts and those two thick centre lines meet. Three where the first blue part of the tail starts, next to the thick inner lines. I'm not completely sure, but I don't think her eye outline should go outside the head on the far eye. In fact there's some general weirdness around that area. Where's her blue eye make-up thing? The two hair lines closest to the ear in the forelock don't go all the way to the edge. The side eyelashes should have a flat "base" as a result of being layered undered the eye white, here they seem roundish.
Oh wow, that's a lot..I honestly hope you don't feel discouraged by all these.
It is indeed a lot, but for something I tried to finish at Midnight, I'm not surprised. The cutie mark was basically a last-second patch because it was midnight, I was lazy, and I couldn't be bothered vectoring it. It is on my "things to fix" list. I did put a lens on the glasses, but it was a mostly transparent black. (10%). You're right, they do need a blue lens. As for the eye whites... I kind of forgot to add those. :facehoof: That probably explains why there's no colour difference. (And thanks for picking up on that, 'cause I completely missed it.) As for the eyes, once again, I got lazy. Count it as something else on my "To Fix" list. You're also right about the area around her far eye... I need to pretty much re-model that. Also, I would normally fix the fill gaps, too, but forgot this time. The "To Do" list grows. Add those hair lines to it, I missed those too. c: Although I'm not quite sure what you mean by the blue eye make-up thing. o.o
I won't be near a computer over the course of next week, and I have a few things to sort out before then, so the fixes may well take a while; but I shall get around to them eventually. Thankyou once again for taking the time to critique my work, and point out what needs work.
Rarity fits well on that cover. I like the white lines as well, they add a nice touch.
Thanks for crediting me in the description!
Thanks for linking. C: I like to know when people use my vectors.
you're improving, you know? ^^
Oh wow, that's a lot..I honestly hope you don't feel discouraged by all these.
The cutie mark was basically a last-second patch because it was midnight, I was lazy, and I couldn't be bothered vectoring it. It is on my "things to fix" list.
I did put a lens on the glasses, but it was a mostly transparent black. (10%). You're right, they do need a blue lens.
As for the eye whites... I kind of forgot to add those. :facehoof:
That probably explains why there's no colour difference. (And thanks for picking up on that, 'cause I completely missed it.)
As for the eyes, once again, I got lazy. Count it as something else on my "To Fix" list.
You're also right about the area around her far eye... I need to pretty much re-model that.
Also, I would normally fix the fill gaps, too, but forgot this time. The "To Do" list grows.
Add those hair lines to it, I missed those too. c:
Although I'm not quite sure what you mean by the blue eye make-up thing. o.o
I won't be near a computer over the course of next week, and I have a few things to sort out before then, so the fixes may well take a while; but I shall get around to them eventually. Thankyou once again for taking the time to critique my work, and point out what needs work.